Sunday 24 November 2013

Writing Term 4


I am learning to: Describe a sea creature from the story Commotion in the Ocean.

What I need is: 
Describing words
What the animal is
What the animal looks like
What the animal does

Dolphin

My dolphin has sharp teeth. It lives in the water and it meets it’s friends. It lives in a cave. It has a silver tummy.

Jessica

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